My Comic!

Adept Posts : 1983 Registration date : 2008-01-26

I am doing a comic, it's about club penguin.
It's called "The 3 Not-So Super Penguins", and it features Neoquest2, who you obviously all know, Arsbob, my friend, who very few PC members might remember, and his brother, Rich1234.
Episode 1:
My Comic! 339u6ms

Episode 2:

My Comic! 24cvdw9

Rate it, 1-10.

Subject: Re: My Comic! February 16th 2008, 8:00 pm

Really hard to read, a little sloppy too, could use some coloring, 7/10. :)

Adept Posts : 1983 Registration date : 2008-01-26

Thanks, I know, I stink at drawing.

Paragon Posts : 7260 Registration date : 2008-01-27

Cool! 7/10. Funny, yet not the best ;) Keep trying

Super-Human Posts : 3025 Registration date : 2008-01-27

Make it a little neater. I cant read it.

Paragon Posts : 7114 Registration date : 2008-01-27

I cant tell what it says. :(

Subject: Re: My Comic! February 16th 2008, 8:43 pm

Neo wrote:: Thanks, I know, I stink at drawing.

He's not talking about the drawing.He's saying that your handwriting isn't legible.

Forum Myth Posts : 7689 Registration date : 2008-01-26

Shouldn't this be moved to Clubpenguin FanArt.

Adept Posts : 1983 Registration date : 2008-01-26

I know I can't. Sometimes the only "X" on my Report Card is under Handwriting and Neatness.

Forum Myth Posts : 7689 Registration date : 2008-01-26

I like how it looks. Nice try neo.

Vanguard Posts : 4198 Registration date : 2008-02-02

The drawing needs to be a tiny bit more neater I think.

Adept Posts : 1983 Registration date : 2008-01-26

They get better every time, Episode 3 is coming up Next Thursday, or Monday.

Subject: Re: My Comic! February 16th 2008, 9:44 pm

It's okay...I can't read it, and the drawings aren't great, and it needs color. Overall, I give a 6/10; it would probably be 8/10 if I could read it.

If you want to get better at penguins, click here.
~Egaro

Vagabond Posts : 59 Registration date : 2008-02-09

nice try, just a little hard to read and pictures are nooby lol, but tis a good story

Adept Posts : 1983 Registration date : 2008-01-26

I can't draw feet on anything.

Subject: Re: My Comic! February 17th 2008, 12:26 pm

It's easy, just make triangles for the penguin feet. ;)
~Egaro

Adept Posts : 1983 Registration date : 2008-01-26

I can't do that, it makes it look like circles.

Hero for Hire Posts : 1341 Registration date : 2008-01-26

You should do Comic Life.

It's better than Paint.

Hero for Hire Posts : 1335 Registration date : 2008-01-27

It's funny, but not the best artwork, 6/10.

Subject: Re: My Comic! February 17th 2008, 2:05 pm

Nice try, but the graphics is werid, sorry.

The Chosen One Posts : 9446 Registration date : 2008-01-30

Looks nice but hard to read ,Try adding colors and make the drawings more neat and less sloppy especially the hands and feet =] .

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