Skateboard Sig

Comments? I want to get better :D

Its a great piece, heres a pretty good tut that might help you out a bit with that exact sig, 8/10...

http://www.gimptalk.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=14&t=19742

RR posted it like months ago, and I found it pretty helpful for a few sigs.

~Bam

Awesome 10/10

Any more comments? Something that can really help me and my tag.

9/10, the big red light is a bit too powerful

This pink c4d is really deteriorating the sig as it just looks like its slapped on the top of the sig. Also the blue c4d in left bottom should not be there.



This is a very bad negative space. When i looked at the sig for first, it was the first thing that took my attention and never should an empty space should get highlighted ( maybe it was accidental but it needs to be prevented/removed ).



I see no flow in the signature. Idea is ok but it seems to me that a lot of images are being put on one another. The arrows above indicate, what the flow could have been according to me.

You used nice c4ds but their placement was not that good.

Also you should work on your lightning so that you can highlight the good parts in the sig.

The only thing i liked in this sig except the colors is TEXT.
The big central text plus the small. There should not be two text placed at distance but somehow you made it look good which makes it rare.

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This pink c4d is really deteriorating the sig as it just looks like its slapped on the top of the sig. Also the blue c4d in left bottom should not be there.



This is a very bad negative space. When i looked at the sig for first, it was the first thing that took my attention and never should an empty space should get highlighted ( maybe it was accidental but it needs to be prevented/removed ).



I see no flow in the signature. Idea is ok but it seems to me that a lot of images are being put on one another. The arrows above indicate, what the flow could have been according to me.

You used nice c4ds but their placement was not that good.

Also you should work on your lightning so that you can highlight the good parts in the sig.

The only thing i liked in this sig except the colors is TEXT.
The big central text plus the small. There should not be two text placed at distance but somehow you made it look good which makes it rare.

Thanks , Also thanks for the time you put to help me. It helps a lot trust me. Also do is the skateboard not visible? I posted this sig on another forum and they said they couldnt see a skateboard.

The text ENNF is the skateboard i believe.

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The text ENNF is the skateboard i believe.

Yes it is but people on PR dont see a skateboard