Are We Allowed To Write Poems?

**I'm Dangerous** Posts : 5403 Registration date : 2008-10-10

If we are then I have one:
Once when I was skiing,
I didn't wan't to go sight-seeing,
but when I did, it took me to Madrid.
I came back with a thud,
then came along my best bud,
saying," You have a bump on your back."
I told him had hit a tack.
After that, I was zooming down the mountain
when I saw a guy hit a water fountain.
He said it was a lie,
and I said, " Good-Bye!"
His name was Ben
and I never saw him again.

Like it? Rate out of ten please.

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Static wrote:: If we are then I have one:
Once when I was skiing,
I didn't wan't to go sight-seeing,
but when I did, it took me to Madrid.
I came back with a thud,
then came along my best bud,
saying," You have a bump on your back."
I told him had hit a tack.
After that, I was zooming down the mountain
when I saw a guy hit a water fountain.
He said it was a lie,
and I said, " Good-Bye!"
His name was Ben
and I never saw him again.

Like it? Rate out of ten please.

That's a very inspireble poem, Static! 8/10.. :D

~STG

**I'm Dangerous** Posts : 5403 Registration date : 2008-10-10

Snoman The Great wrote:: That's a very inspireble poem, Static! 8/10.. :D

~STG

Thanks :D

Forum Dweller Posts : 192 Registration date : 2009-01-04

Nice. What kind of poem is it? I rate it...7/10.

Hero for Hire Posts : 1366 Registration date : 2009-01-04

Very Good!, Pretty good.

8.5/10

**I'm Dangerous** Posts : 5403 Registration date : 2008-10-10

Vortex wrote:: Nice. What kind of poem is it? I rate it...7/10.

it's for my school writing contest.

Mercenary Posts : 747 Registration date : 2008-08-12

Wow Cool!

**I'm Dangerous** Posts : 5403 Registration date : 2008-10-10

Kyledavis2 wrote:: Wow Cool!

please rate it.

Hero for Hire Posts : 1368 Registration date : 2008-11-04

8.5/10 its a cool poem.

Guest

Static wrote:: If we are then I have one:
Once when I was skiing,
I didn't wan't to go sight-seeing,
but when I did, it took me to Madrid.
I came back with a thud,
then came along my best bud,
saying," You have a bump on your back."
I told him had hit a tack.
After that, I was zooming down the mountain
when I saw a guy hit a water fountain.
He said it was a lie,
and I said, " Good-Bye!"
His name was Ben
and I never saw him again.

Like it? Rate out of ten please.

Oh, I forgot... Yeah, of couser you can post poems! Don't you think that's why the Staff made this topic? ;)

~STG

Super-Human Posts : 3137 Registration date : 2008-02-01

Very nice and catchy
8/10

Vagabond Posts : 98 Registration date : 2008-11-27

thats quite good. I hope you win the contest! i will give you...umm...8/10

**Wow it's actually really good Static :D 8.5/10**

Wow it's actually really good Static :D 8.5/10

**Retired Staff** Posts : 8359 Registration date : 2008-02-09

Madrid, Is th Capital of Spain, It took me like weeks to learn that.

~Bam

**I'm Dangerous** Posts : 5403 Registration date : 2008-10-10

Cherrynub wrote:: thats quite good. I hope you win the contest! i will give you...umm...8/10

What contest?

... Oh! The one at my school!

**Retired Staff** Posts : 3992 Registration date : 2008-11-18

Nice! 10/10

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