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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 22nd 2009, 3:13 pm | |
| The Chick Part 1 Written By That Guy Edited by That Guy Story inspired by Egaro.
Characters Shanda. Mack. Egaro. That Guy. John. Cj. Kandy.
Part 1 The Question "Hey Mack wanna go out to the mall and check out some hot chicks!" "Sorry John but am supposed to be going to the mall with Egaro and I dont want you to cramp my style." "He still hasn't told you his real name and you still wanna hang out with him instead of spending some time with your one and only cousin called Mack?" "Come on John you know I dont get to meet so many great people like him and besides dont you have a girlfreind or something." "You mean Shanda nah she said that I wasn't what she was looking for. HA!I dont need her anyway!" "Anyway am out I said to Egaro I would meet him at 3 o'clock and look at the time it's already half 2." "Whatever dont come running to me when he turns out to be crazy just like all your other friends."
30 minutes later when Mack was looking for Egaro in the mall he bumped in to Shanda.
"John is that you?I was calling you on your phone wanting to talk to you." *I knew she just couldn't keep herself away from me.* "I was wondering if you could give me Egaros number you know so I can get to know him a little bit better." "He is around the coner beside the cinema ask him yourself." *I KNEW IT WAS TO GOOD TO BE TRUE!* "Sup guys." "The sky." "HEY EGARO!I was wondering could I possibly get your number?" *Please say yes!* "Sure.But could I ask you something." "Yeah." "Wanna go to the cinema to see shopaholics?" *HE LIKE'S ME!* "Yeah I would love to!" "What about me?" "You can come to if you want." "Fine then I guess I will."
After the movie. "John here is 20 dollars go buy yourself something at the shops." "Hmm okay then" "Egaro I really like you and I was wondering." "You were wondering?" "Do you wanna become more than friends." ......
Find out what happened next in The Chick Make sure you read part 2 on Friday.:)
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Egaro Hero of Time
Posts : 13850 Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 22nd 2009, 3:30 pm | |
| The fact that anyone, even in a story, would fall for me literally has me tearing up laughing. Thanks; I needed that. :D
Do whatever you'd like with me, by the way; I won't consider anything offensive. :face: ~Egaro | |
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Redziggy Adept
Posts : 1853 Registration date : 2008-08-12
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 22nd 2009, 3:32 pm | |
| - Egaro wrote:
- The fact that anyone, even in a story, would fall for me literally has me tearing up laughing. Thanks; I needed that. :D
Do whatever you'd like with me, by the way; I won't consider anything offensive. :face: ~Egaro Stop downing ya self, she wasn't the end of the world. But I know exactly how your feeling and it's hard. haha, nice story, for some reason i wanna know what happens next. | |
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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 22nd 2009, 3:33 pm | |
| - Egaro wrote:
- The fact that anyone, even in a story, would fall for me literally has me tearing up laughing. Thanks; I needed that. :D
Do whatever you'd like with me, by the way; I won't consider anything offensive. :face: ~Egaro No problem. | |
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Jess Digintary
Posts : 2646 Registration date : 2008-04-12
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 22nd 2009, 4:01 pm | |
| Cool story. Not too long. Funny and easy to read. I wonder what egaro says XD. | |
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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 22nd 2009, 4:09 pm | |
| Part 2 comes out on Friday make sure you read it. :) | |
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Jess Digintary
Posts : 2646 Registration date : 2008-04-12
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 22nd 2009, 4:11 pm | |
| I'm sure I will! It's got me excited now XD. | |
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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 22nd 2009, 4:23 pm | |
| You should be 8D Part 2 will have a suprise for the readers! ;) | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 22nd 2009, 6:56 pm | |
| could you put it out earlier? Pleaaaaase??? |
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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 22nd 2009, 6:58 pm | |
| I might have to look for writters and editors first then maybe it could be much earlier I'll try write part 2 for Friday hope you all read it as it will be very interesting! | |
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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 23rd 2009, 5:28 pm | |
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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 25th 2009, 3:24 pm | |
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Jess Digintary
Posts : 2646 Registration date : 2008-04-12
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 25th 2009, 4:48 pm | |
| Bad typo :P. Anyways. I think you should make the story a bit more "Ooh I wanna' read that next time" If you know what I mean. But it's great though - Can't wait untill friday! | |
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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 25th 2009, 7:57 pm | |
| It's the first part I could have done better. It wasn't a typo I could have edited it when I was typing but to lazy to go back and edit it XD On friday I will be giving out something so hope you all read fridays part 2. | |
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Snowiyflake Hero for Hire
Posts : 1368 Registration date : 2008-11-04
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 28th 2009, 2:37 am | |
| lol! ill read part two on friday. :) | |
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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question February 28th 2009, 10:12 am | |
| sorry part 2 isn't out yet am just busy it will be out later. | |
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hammy2011 Forum Dweller
Posts : 171 Registration date : 2009-03-12
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question November 12th 2009, 3:12 pm | |
| It's been more that friday, you know. You've taken MONTHS. | |
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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question November 21st 2009, 12:14 pm | |
| Wow I forgot about this time to start up a new one! | |
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Plurk. Mercenary
Posts : 735 Registration date : 2009-01-19
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question November 21st 2009, 12:15 pm | |
| Wow I forgot about this time to start up a new one! | |
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Bronze Vanguard
Posts : 4736 Registration date : 2009-05-24
| Subject: Re: The Chick. Part 1 The Question November 21st 2009, 12:33 pm | |
| It's a bit informal and there is more converse than actual narrative, but the concept is pretty good and the next bit will be really good if you take on board all the comments.
7.5/10 | |
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