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PostSubject: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 17th 2009, 12:03 pm

Colors 1-1

Colors 2copy-3

Colors 3copy

Rate + CnC

Constructive Criticism please.


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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 17th 2009, 12:08 pm

Great job Robo! The render blends in great! 10/10...but not your best.
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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 17th 2009, 2:55 pm

Not bad. I would blur the colors a little bit to make it look good but this still deserves a 9/10.
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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 17th 2009, 3:16 pm

Blur the colors?
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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 17th 2009, 4:46 pm

That looks great! Seems complicated XD
10/10!
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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 17th 2009, 6:56 pm

Robodragon wrote:
Colors 1-1

Colors 2copy-3

Colors 3copy

Rate + CnC

Constructive Criticism please.

Very nice Robo. The text in the first one doesnt match. The 2nd and 3rd are the best. I dont have much of a complaint except that you have to try to blend those smudges a bit more with the render/stock. I see you tried to blend it, but it just needs a bit more. Nice effort. 7/10
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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 17th 2009, 7:30 pm

Thanks. When you say blend it, what do you mean?
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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 17th 2009, 8:15 pm

The writing on the first one doesn't fit in. And other than that, I don't like any of them at all, sorry. =\
No way to explain my hate for unblurred and choppy randomness.
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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 18th 2009, 10:53 pm

I like the writing in the first one but the color doesnt blend in, Great job with them :D I like them cause its Kreative
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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 19th 2009, 11:08 pm

Robodragon wrote:
Thanks. When you say blend it, what do you mean?

I mean make the smudging look more like it attached and "together" with the render/stock. You did a nice job of blending, but it needs a bit more because the smudging seems a tad "seperated" from the render. Sorry, I dont know if you get it. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 19th 2009, 11:19 pm

Very nice piece of artwork here. The render blends very well but still stands out.
Perfect!
10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Colors   Colors EmptyMay 19th 2009, 11:22 pm

RR wrote:
Robodragon wrote:
Thanks. When you say blend it, what do you mean?

I mean make the smudging look more like it attached and "together" with the render/stock. You did a nice job of blending, but it needs a bit more because the smudging seems a tad "seperated" from the render. Sorry, I dont know if you get it. xD

Sorry, It must be my lack of intelligence. xD
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