Penguins VS Ghost Marc978 Book Series Chapter 1

Mercenary Posts : 846 Registration date : 2009-05-31

Chapter 1

It all started on Halloween night in club penguin a penguin named
Marc978 was given out candy to penguins someone knocked on the door.
the penguin went to the door and answered but nobody was there. another
knock 5 minuets later the penguin answered again there was still no one
then the lights went out in the penguins igloo the penguin said" whats
going on"? a ghost showed up named the phantom and the phantom said"I
am here to kidnap you" Marc978 said "why?" and the ghost said "Because
i hate this town and i hate penguins." the lights went out a scream by
marc978 "AHHHHHHH help" when the lights came back on they both were
gone.

Chapter 2 To Come Soon

Super-Human Posts : 3161 Registration date : 2009-04-15

I don't like criticising videos and am not good at it but I will criticise this.

Really bad punctuation and spelling...

Exemplar Posts : 2282 Registration date : 2008-08-21

Marc978 wrote:: Chapter 1

It all started on Halloween night in club penguin a penguin named
Marc978 was given out candy to penguins someone knocked on the door.
the penguin went to the door and answered but nobody was there. another
knock 5 minuets later the penguin answered again there was still no one
then the lights went out in the penguins igloo the penguin said" whats
going on"? a ghost showed up named the phantom and the phantom said"I
am here to kidnap you" Marc978 said "why?" and the ghost said "Because
i hate this town and i hate penguins." the lights went out a scream by
marc978 "AHHHHHHH help" when the lights came back on they both were
gone.

Chapter 2 To Come Soon

That would scare 3 year olds, but it wouldn't scare me.

0/10.