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PostSubject: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 26th 2009, 4:43 pm

This is my comeback tag on the count of not making one in like a month. Tell me what you think.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 26th 2009, 6:17 pm

The light source is pretty unprofessional. The text quality is bad. There is northing in the bottom right corner and I find it very distracting. It seems like you just placed one or two c4ds on the render...

Definitely not your best. Sorry
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 28th 2009, 8:05 pm

I think ur wrong about the lighting. The lighting is very good.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 29th 2009, 12:12 am

Who are you? o.O

And you should probably listen to him -__-
The lighting is bad.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 29th 2009, 4:15 pm

No flow in your signature.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 30th 2009, 1:18 pm

Omg. The light ray is not the source of lighting. You guys have no idea what ur talking about. And that has decent flow...
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 30th 2009, 3:47 pm

The Lone Stone wrote:
I think ur wrong about the lighting. The lighting is very good.
You used a filter for it. It does not belong with the sig in my opinion.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 31st 2009, 2:00 am

The Lone Stone wrote:
Omg. The light ray is not the source of lighting. You guys have no idea what ur talking about. And that has decent flow...

It has no flow at all.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 31st 2009, 12:26 pm

... says the Australian. Batman 497332
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 31st 2009, 12:42 pm

Mr. Stone, cool it. I like the australian. So back off. Your signature is just a bunch of effects. Not art.Pick up the brush and try again.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 31st 2009, 12:44 pm

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... says the Australian. Batman 497332

Excuse me? I'm sure I'm a human being just like you.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyDecember 31st 2009, 12:45 pm

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The Lone Stone wrote:
... says the Australian. Batman 497332

Excuse me? I'm sure I'm a human being just like you.


He's just mad no one cares.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyJanuary 1st 2010, 9:30 am

The Lone Stone wrote:
Omg. The light ray is not the source of lighting. You guys have no idea what ur talking about. And that has decent flow...
Either take our constructive criticism or don't make signatures anymore. If you want CnC then listen.

Take away the Lens Flare and work on the lightning more. Adding a Lens Flare makes the sig look very unprofessional like Brian said. Fix the text a little. Add a few more C4D's in, since it looks like it's just the render in the signature and understand that it has no flow. Not your best signature.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyJanuary 1st 2010, 9:31 am

He's already banned on DP for this reason. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyJanuary 3rd 2010, 1:30 pm

THE LIGHT RAY IS NOT THE LIGHT SOURCE. STOP SAYING THAT IT MAKES IT LOOK UNPROFESSIONAL.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyJanuary 3rd 2010, 1:35 pm

Light source or not, it is useless and we have a right to call it unprofessional because we think it is. Just stop posting your artwork if you aren't going to take our critique. You are wasting your time here.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyJanuary 3rd 2010, 1:37 pm

The Lone Stone wrote:
THE LIGHT RAY IS NOT THE LIGHT SOURCE. STOP SAYING THAT IT MAKES IT LOOK UNPROFESSIONAL.
CAN YOU STOP WRITING IN CAPS, PLEASE? Maybe to us, it looks unprofessional.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyJanuary 6th 2010, 12:58 am

Everyone is right. I believe when you say we do not know what we are talking about, you do not know what you are talking about. Keep trying.
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PostSubject: Re: Batman   Batman EmptyJanuary 6th 2010, 1:17 am

Dont discriminate AUSTRALIANS!!!!!!!!!! Batman 553499 Batman 997602 Batman 717955 kangas are good boxers u know and we have the most of the worlds deadly venom creatures dotn make me throw a snake

i was gunna say i like ur art but now im not CAUSE U RACIST!

Also the text quality i agree with brain its not that good. same with everything else he said was rite but keep trying!
Just take the critisizm to make u better and u will becom better dont flame and write in caps at everyone and yell and even cause havoc here!
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