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Here's another I made today. I don't think it's as good as my other. Maybe it's just me..

Total improvement, but you should add some more depth by darkening parts around focal, then lowering the opacity. Try doing that to the hair too. Try blurring of the C4D parts so it looks 3D, this makes it have more depth. Also, try blurring the very corners of things to make it have better depths like the outlining of the pink flowers on her dress, and that part of her hair at the left that's sticking out. I'm trying to explain this as simple as I can, unless you know what depth, lighting, focal, etc. means. Oh, It might also look better if you move the text more to the upper left, next to where the hair begins to "smudge-off".

Oh, and try making a different version with these changes, so you can see what to fix and everything.

This is really good. One of your best. in my opinion.

It's great! I just don't think the text goes well, especially the 'C'.. xDD.

BiteTheDust wrote:

Total improvement, but you should add some more depth by darkening parts around focal, then lowering the opacity. Try doing that to the hair too. Try blurring of the C4D parts so it looks 3D, this makes it have more depth. Also, try blurring the very corners of things to make it have better depths like the outlining of the pink flowers on her dress, and that part of her hair at the left that's sticking out. I'm trying to explain this as simple as I can, unless you know what depth, lighting, focal, etc. means. Oh, It might also look better if you move the text more to the upper left, next to where the hair begins to "smudge-off".

Oh, and try making a different version with these changes, so you can see what to fix and everything.

This is really good. One of your best. in my opinion.

Well, you can't really add much to what he said, but...
Remove the borders & text. Darken the whole tag a bit.

Text and border is poor, and color is a bit intense, but the flow is good and effects are much better. One of your best.

8.9/10