Please tell me how to improve!
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The Secert Message
It was just a normal day, walking to penguin school, wondering what it was today, when I caught up with one of my friends;Jack, so I talked to him for a while, untill Jack said
"Watch out!"
I wondered why, so I asked why,
BANG I hit the lamp-post :( .
When I got to school with a hurting head, I put my coat up and looked at the right on side, there was a lettter, I picked it up, and it was unbelieliveable what I saw,
"
Hi whoever picks this up, get...Some of it a riped off somewhere, and went off to do normal school stuff, boring school stuff in fact...
When I got out of school at 3:30PM, I woke up it was that boring and started to walk to the shop to get some chocolate, but it was sooooo hot it melted as soon as I got outside, but I saw a another word in the wrapper, it said
"
Ready for the big t..."Some more of it had riped off, so I ran to school to get the first pice.
When I got home, I stuck the words togther on a pice of paper, so now it said:
"
Hi whoever pickes this up, get ready for the big t..." I kept wondering what the T was, untill, I gave up, and went on Club Penguin, and saw three names, they were,
"eribble" "fight" "in3452"
So I tried them with me message, and it went togther, so now it said,
"
Hi whoever pickes this up, get ready for the big teribble fight in"Wow, nearly all the pices had been filled, So I got ready...
The next day, it was the weekend, so I played on mario Kart WII on worldwide, and looked at the names, some of them were called
"48 hours" "at" "town"
So I was sorted, everything done so now it was,
"Hi whoever picks this up, get ready for the big fight in 48 hours at town."
48 hours later,
I had bought my mates ready to fight, looking around for them, untill,
"
RRRROOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRR! WATCH OUT LITTLE KIDS, SAY GOODBYE!"AAAAAAAH! WERE UNDER ATTACK, BY A 3 BIG ROBOTS!"Jack srceamed and ran behind the post box, I slowy stood back in shock...okay, this was gonna be tough...we couldn't let them get away, so I went behind them and climbed up and pulled a lever, I fell on a heap on the ground but so did the robots
"Wow, can we do this again some time!!!" I said...
The End.
