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Asho
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Asho


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PostSubject: Bored Poem   Bored Poem EmptyJune 13th 2008, 10:43 am

I was bored, so I made this poem:

Bored, Bored .:|:. Life is Bored
What to do .:|:. Nothing to do
Boring .:|:. Boring
Forums, Forums? .:|:. Posting only in a forum
CP? CP? .:|:. Earning Money in CP.
Boring Boring .:|:. Everybody is bored!!!

Code:

[b]Boring Boring .:|:. Everybody is bored!!!

I think I am right ehh?[/b]
Enjoy :Shy: .
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lookathis
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lookathis


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PostSubject: Re: Bored Poem   Bored Poem EmptyJune 13th 2008, 11:01 am

Nice poem!
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Maria
The Chosen One
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Maria


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PostSubject: Re: Bored Poem   Bored Poem EmptyJune 13th 2008, 11:36 am

Good poem, Here's some lines you could add there :P :

Bored, Bored .:|:. PARIS HILTON ON BOARD !!!
What now ? .:|:. Go catch a brown cow :D

And maybe even switch this :

What to do .:|:. Nothing to do

With this :

What to do ? .:|:. Got no clue
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Mickey4741
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PostSubject: Re: Bored Poem   Bored Poem EmptyJune 13th 2008, 5:28 pm

Nice idea, but that was a horrible poem. No rhyming, it was set up wrong, and had horrible grammar. Sorry...
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Snowball423
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PostSubject: Re: Bored Poem   Bored Poem EmptyJune 13th 2008, 6:49 pm

mickey4741 wrote:
Nice idea, but that was a horrible poem. No rhyming, it was set up wrong, and had horrible grammar. Sorry...

Not all peoms rhyme. This is 7asho0m's style of poetry.

Nice job :D
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