Heartless

Subject: Heartless July 18th 2008, 3:57 pm

I didn't use a full tut, but I used the brushes and pieces of the Forsaken Mage tut on GIMPTalk to help me out:

Heartless Heartless

Rate and give criticism. I have the .XCF still, so I can add/take out.
~Egaro

Super-Human Posts : 3137 Registration date : 2008-02-01

6.5/10
Needs a better render because it's too dull.
You used the Fractal brushes a lot so make it less.

Paragon Posts : 7260 Registration date : 2008-01-27

5/10. Mysterious and nice but just looks like a purple and blue blob. Sorry.

Subject: Re: Heartless July 18th 2008, 6:43 pm

It is a purple and blue blob, more or less; played Kingdom Hearts before? It's basically a shadow bug thing, very little shape to it.
~Egaro

Forum Legend Posts : 6175 Registration date : 2008-02-23

Nice. 6/10
Not very good.
I don't like how you can't see the shadow's anteni and the big one in the back looks... odd.

Subject: Re: Heartless July 19th 2008, 12:05 pm

Well the tag itself is too dark and it needs something more. Blend in the render too eg.

Subject: Re: Heartless July 19th 2008, 12:17 pm

Egaro wrote:: I didn't use a full tut, but I used the brushes and pieces of the Forsaken Mage tut on GIMPTalk to help me out:

I've seen that tut before, tried it, it was pretteh good..

Rate and give criticism. I have the .XCF still, so I can add/take out.
~Egaro

Adept Posts : 1859 Registration date : 2008-05-21

I suggest adding some more effects, maybe make it less dark aswell. The render fits in but I just feel its missing something. I'd take away the layer of black and add some effects in there, something that will make it stand out. ;)

Thanks, Flubby.

Subject: Re: Heartless July 19th 2008, 1:17 pm

I think I might take out the large Heartless, it doesn't look good in this sig.

I still have the .xcf, so I can still work with this, which I will do. :D
~Egaro

Adept Posts : 1859 Registration date : 2008-05-21

Yeah, you may want to take out the duplicate. When your going to make a faded duplicate of your render I suggest you don't make it stand out too much. You want to make it visible but you want other effects to overlap it. Just so its not the main effect of the tag.

Thanks, Flubby.

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