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PostSubject: Halo Tag   Halo Tag EmptyDecember 31st 2008, 1:25 pm

Halo Tag Halopk8

i hate halo though :O
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PostSubject: Re: Halo Tag   Halo Tag EmptyDecember 31st 2008, 1:29 pm

Terrfic and perfect. What program do you use?

10/10.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo Tag   Halo Tag EmptyDecember 31st 2008, 1:39 pm

maybe just add a border?
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PostSubject: Re: Halo Tag   Halo Tag EmptyDecember 31st 2008, 2:16 pm

No, PLEASE don't add a boarder. And it isn't your best. You have nice effects but you need to work on organizing them, giving it more flow.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo Tag   Halo Tag EmptyDecember 31st 2008, 3:06 pm

Your using this style too much... Focal, should NEVER be centered, Master cheif is a little too dark for the effects around him and the flow and compo are bad.

Sorry, needs improvement.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo Tag   Halo Tag EmptyDecember 31st 2008, 3:19 pm

8/10. As Flubby said, Master Chief is too dark and hard to see, maybe make the colors a little bit lighter.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo Tag   Halo Tag EmptyDecember 31st 2008, 3:36 pm

Lighten it up a little bit but good affects, 8/10
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PostSubject: Re: Halo Tag   Halo Tag EmptyDecember 31st 2008, 3:49 pm

Work more on flow and try harder on hiding parts of different layers that include applied images or the same render/stock. Somewhere around where Master Chief is I see part of his body. Work more on flow, and too much smudging and flow. Also, work on Lighting. 7/10.
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