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Discpenguin Wanderer
Posts : 100 Registration date : 2009-05-15
| Subject: Halo February 5th 2011, 1:35 pm | |
| It's easily been six months since I've made something. First in a very long time. | |
| | | ParkourSAM Digintary
Posts : 2679 Registration date : 2008-06-16
| Subject: Re: Halo February 6th 2011, 11:59 am | |
| Good depth, text needs work (You still have a habit of putting it at the bottom right/left, which is bad to have), lighting and coloring could use a little bit extra work and a little bit better flow.
Try a bit more, if you haven't already, of C4D's, and may I suggest clipping masks help too if you don't have those already. Try adding more gradient maps too and a curves adjustment or something for better contrast and shadowing.
http://www.clubpenguinplanet.net/t32565-wanna-let-you-guys-know-what-cnc-is
Probably the best I've seen in a while 'cause barely anyone makes Signatures anymore on this forum. | |
| | | Bronze Vanguard
Posts : 4736 Registration date : 2009-05-24
| Subject: Re: Halo February 6th 2011, 3:00 pm | |
| I wasn't expecting that from a guy who hasn't touched signatures for six months. The depth is nice, and the whole thing fits nicely. The colours are a bit plain, though, so you could probably use a few clipping masks and gradients. Like BTD said, it's a good job. | |
| | | Rifleman-Dlb Vanguard
Posts : 4869 Registration date : 2008-10-23
| Subject: Re: Halo February 6th 2011, 5:19 pm | |
| I like it...9/10. It would be better of there was no border, and the text needs some help. | |
| | | Bam Retired Staff
Posts : 8359 Registration date : 2008-02-09
| Subject: Re: Halo February 6th 2011, 8:11 pm | |
| I like the depth. The concept is unoriginal. | |
| | | Discpenguin Wanderer
Posts : 100 Registration date : 2009-05-15
| Subject: Re: Halo February 7th 2011, 12:40 am | |
| Thanks for the CnC. It's greatly appreciated. | |
| | | Corwo Penguin Drifter
Posts : 36 Registration date : 2011-01-23
| Subject: Re: Halo February 7th 2011, 10:44 pm | |
| 9/10 great render,nice effects Disc | |
| | | Digit
Posts : 2262 Registration date : 2009-02-12
| Subject: Re: Halo February 8th 2011, 2:11 am | |
| The best I have seen in a VERY long time, 10/10 | |
| | | Skyward Sam Paragon
Posts : 7114 Registration date : 2008-01-27
| Subject: Re: Halo February 8th 2011, 2:43 am | |
| - Pyro wrote:
- I wasn't expecting that from a guy who hasn't touched signatures for six months. The depth is nice, and the whole thing fits nicely. The colours are a bit plain, though, so you could probably use a few clipping masks and gradients.
Like BTD said, it's a good job. It looks like he did use some clipping masks. Correct me if I'm wrong Disc. | |
| | | ParkourSAM Digintary
Posts : 2679 Registration date : 2008-06-16
| Subject: Re: Halo February 8th 2011, 10:02 pm | |
| - TheBigGerman wrote:
- Pyro wrote:
- I wasn't expecting that from a guy who hasn't touched signatures for six months. The depth is nice, and the whole thing fits nicely. The colours are a bit plain, though, so you could probably use a few clipping masks and gradients.
Like BTD said, it's a good job. It looks like he did use some clipping masks. Correct me if I'm wrong Disc. Same here. The opacity looks pretty low for them though, which in my opinion is a bad technique to use for clipping masks and brushes. To give more depth, just have full opacity and blur some parts. | |
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