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PostSubject: Halo   Halo EmptyFebruary 5th 2011, 1:35 pm

It's easily been six months since I've made something. First in a very long time.

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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyFebruary 6th 2011, 11:59 am

Good depth, text needs work (You still have a habit of putting it at the bottom right/left, which is bad to have), lighting and coloring could use a little bit extra work and a little bit better flow.

Try a bit more, if you haven't already, of C4D's, and may I suggest clipping masks help too if you don't have those already. Try adding more gradient maps too and a curves adjustment or something for better contrast and shadowing.

http://www.clubpenguinplanet.net/t32565-wanna-let-you-guys-know-what-cnc-is

Probably the best I've seen in a while 'cause barely anyone makes Signatures anymore on this forum.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyFebruary 6th 2011, 3:00 pm

I wasn't expecting that from a guy who hasn't touched signatures for six months. The depth is nice, and the whole thing fits nicely. The colours are a bit plain, though, so you could probably use a few clipping masks and gradients.
Like BTD said, it's a good job.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyFebruary 6th 2011, 5:19 pm

I like it...9/10. It would be better of there was no border, and the text needs some help.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyFebruary 6th 2011, 8:11 pm

I like the depth. The concept is unoriginal.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyFebruary 7th 2011, 12:40 am

Thanks for the CnC. It's greatly appreciated.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyFebruary 7th 2011, 10:44 pm

9/10 great render,nice effects Disc
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyFebruary 8th 2011, 2:11 am

The best I have seen in a VERY long time, 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyFebruary 8th 2011, 2:43 am

Pyro wrote:
I wasn't expecting that from a guy who hasn't touched signatures for six months. The depth is nice, and the whole thing fits nicely. The colours are a bit plain, though, so you could probably use a few clipping masks and gradients.
Like BTD said, it's a good job.

It looks like he did use some clipping masks. Correct me if I'm wrong Disc.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyFebruary 8th 2011, 10:02 pm

TheBigGerman wrote:
Pyro wrote:
I wasn't expecting that from a guy who hasn't touched signatures for six months. The depth is nice, and the whole thing fits nicely. The colours are a bit plain, though, so you could probably use a few clipping masks and gradients.
Like BTD said, it's a good job.

It looks like he did use some clipping masks. Correct me if I'm wrong Disc.

Same here. The opacity looks pretty low for them though, which in my opinion is a bad technique to use for clipping masks and brushes. To give more depth, just have full opacity and blur some parts.
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