Club Penguin Planet
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.



 
HomeLatest imagesRegisterLog in

 

 Halo

Go down 
+3
Thunder
Jess
Bam
7 posters
AuthorMessage
Bam
Retired Staff
Retired Staff
Bam


Posts : 8359
Registration date : 2008-02-09

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 2:11 pm

Halo Halo

~Bam
Back to top Go down
Jess
Digintary
Digintary
Jess


Posts : 2646
Registration date : 2008-04-12

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 2:13 pm

It's really good but the render is covering the 'h' out of halo. And the white text of 'bam' is quite hard to read.

But overall it's good. 8/10.
Back to top Go down
Bam
Retired Staff
Retired Staff
Bam


Posts : 8359
Registration date : 2008-02-09

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 5:36 pm

Thanks for the comment :) ...anyone else?

~Bam
Back to top Go down
Thunder
I'm Dangerous
Thunder


Posts : 5403
Registration date : 2008-10-10

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 5:38 pm

It's good, but I can't read the words.
7/10
Back to top Go down
Bam
Retired Staff
Retired Staff
Bam


Posts : 8359
Registration date : 2008-02-09

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 5:40 pm

Lightning wrote:
It's good, but I can't read the words.
7/10

h a l o

Bam

~Bam
Back to top Go down
Thunder
I'm Dangerous
Thunder


Posts : 5403
Registration date : 2008-10-10

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 5:40 pm

I see it now.
Thanks. ;)
Back to top Go down
Bam
Retired Staff
Retired Staff
Bam


Posts : 8359
Registration date : 2008-02-09

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 5:41 pm

Any time. Anyone else?

~Bam
Back to top Go down
Sjb
Retired Staff
Retired Staff
Sjb


Posts : 6980
Registration date : 2008-10-09

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 5:41 pm

Exactly what PP said!

~Sjb


Back to top Go down
Bam
Retired Staff
Retired Staff
Bam


Posts : 8359
Registration date : 2008-02-09

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 5:54 pm

Thanks...any more?

~Bam
Back to top Go down
twisted.cane
Sidekick
Sidekick
twisted.cane


Posts : 545
Registration date : 2008-09-22

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 5:59 pm

PP pretty much covered it, I give it a 9/10
Back to top Go down
ParkourSAM
Digintary
Digintary
ParkourSAM


Posts : 2679
Registration date : 2008-06-16

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 7:55 pm

There's not much flow, nor depth. Smudging needs improvement. Size width is a bit too wide. Text needs improvement, and it needs a bit of sharpening. The displacement on the left doesn't fit with the signature. It looks beginner, not your best.
Back to top Go down
Bam
Retired Staff
Retired Staff
Bam


Posts : 8359
Registration date : 2008-02-09

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 8:10 pm

Thanks, I know I really messed up on this one.

~Bam
Back to top Go down
Dan
Retired Staff
Retired Staff
Dan


Posts : 6126
Registration date : 2008-01-26

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 8:17 pm

Ohmy. I dont really like it. Should have had the render still colored then made the text that color. Would of looked better.
6/10
-Dan
Back to top Go down
Bam
Retired Staff
Retired Staff
Bam


Posts : 8359
Registration date : 2008-02-09

Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyAugust 31st 2009, 8:32 pm

Ok thanks. I will probably be making a new halo one considering I dont like this one...Locked.

~Bam
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content





Halo Empty
PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo Empty

Back to top Go down
 
Halo
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Another tag... [Halo]
» Another halo sig!
» Halo 4
» Halo Sig!
» Halo

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Club Penguin Planet :: Other Discussions :: Artwork Center-
Jump to: