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PostSubject: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 16th 2010, 11:34 am

Halo Thehalosig-1

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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 16th 2010, 2:05 pm

WOW!



Great job!


Text is awesome!


10/10.



And Halo Rocks!
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 16th 2010, 2:43 pm

Nice flow and style to it, a lil' bit off depth but not perfect, and smudging is pretty evened out. Only problem I have is the streaks of inverted colour fading from the render (they look a bit like lightning bolts). They don't really fit the style.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 16th 2010, 3:20 pm

9/10 It's pretty nice! That "Disc" text is really hard to see and this glow is to strong and what Cold said it's true too.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 16th 2010, 3:24 pm

I can barely see them and I didn't even see them until you pointed them out. Probably a messed up filter. I'll see if I can fix it.

And thanks, DLB.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 16th 2010, 3:40 pm

andreylaur wrote:
9/10 It's pretty nice! That "Disc" text is really hard to see.
~Andreylaur
It's made to be like that.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 16th 2010, 6:41 pm

You could put a little shadow on the text to make it more visible, anyways great job Discpenguin! 9.9/10!
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 16th 2010, 8:41 pm

Great job, Disc!
The text is perfect.
I like how it kind of looks like little lightning bolts. =)
Overall 9.2/10. =)


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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 17th 2010, 12:41 pm

Is it me or does the render look a tad bit pixely?
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 17th 2010, 1:03 pm

-YuNg-StUnNa- wrote:
Is it me or does the render look a tad bit pixely?

Yeah, I agree. Looks a bit over-sharpened more than anything.
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PostSubject: Re: Halo   Halo EmptyJanuary 18th 2010, 2:47 pm

The render is a tad over sharpened but other than that, the depth is pretty nice. You oculd use a little more flow and detail though. Also, try darkening it, its way to bright. Just add a new layer, apply the image, and use the burn tool to darken it. Nice job.

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