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PostSubject: The Move into the NHL   The Move into the NHL EmptyOctober 19th 2009, 8:38 pm

Past few weeks i have been working on a short story based around hockey.

Plot :
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Toby Armstrong was your typical Scottish teenage boy. Always getting in trouble in and outside of school Toby eventualy found something he loved and put dedication into..hockey!.
Joining his local hockey team the Elgin Eagles, Toby clicked instantly and soon everyone knew his name.
Two years after starting hockey, he recieved a call.... "Hello Toby, how would you like to play in the NHL?"...

Okay so that was a realy poor attempt of a quick summary of the plot. It is quite complexed but even a Non Hockey fan can jump into this book and have a good read. (i hope)

Right now im about 1/3rd of the way through it so of course i want YOUR suggestions. Should Toby be a tough guy Enforcer or a Witty PlayMaker ?
I value all your ideas :)

peace ;)
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PostSubject: Re: The Move into the NHL   The Move into the NHL EmptyOctober 19th 2009, 8:51 pm

Playmaker. We have enough Stortini's and George Parros's.
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