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PostSubject: Assassins Creed   Assassins Creed EmptyMay 8th 2010, 7:35 am
I've improved from my old one I think. :D

Last AC Tag: Assassins Creed Assasinscreed-5

Latest AC Tag: Assassins Creed Assassinscreed2

Rate and Criticize.
I tried limiting smudging.
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PostSubject: Re: Assassins Creed   Assassins Creed EmptyMay 8th 2010, 7:59 am
Improvements:
Better text
Less messy
Less smudged

Needs to be improved in:
Colors,remove the thing on the left. Maybe some simple C4D's can help. Make some flow around Altair with some clipping masks.

But I have to say,you've got style,to improve utilize it. Find unnecessary areas and fix it.
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PostSubject: Re: Assassins Creed   Assassins Creed EmptyMay 8th 2010, 11:08 am
Ok thanks DK. :D
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PostSubject: Re: Assassins Creed   Assassins Creed EmptyMay 8th 2010, 4:38 pm
The quality is really bad on both. You darkened the renders face too much. You can not even see the eyes anymore. And it other areas, it is too bright. Stop using those brushes. They are too big and distracting. The second one has better text but it is much more of a mess.
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PostSubject: Re: Assassins Creed   Assassins Creed EmptyMay 8th 2010, 9:48 pm
Grunge grunge grunge grunge : Disabled

Ohkay then.
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