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Ramza
Digintary
Posts : 2681
Registration date : 2008-01-27
| Subject: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:.  March 31st 2008, 5:36 pm | |
| (This is very different then the rating thread, this one is for getting critque so that you can improve)
Here you can get your art critiqued and hopefully improve! | |
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RR
Pinnacle of Survival
Posts : 8155
Registration date : 2008-01-31
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. March 31st 2008, 5:38 pm | |
| I kind of blended my render more in-  | |
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Dobby
Super-Human
Posts : 3100
Registration date : 2008-02-25
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. March 31st 2008, 5:41 pm | |
| Looks better ;) I'm not the right guy to give improvements tho' :P
Is my new Avatar any good? | |
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Egaro
Hero of Time
Posts : 13850
Registration date : 2008-01-26
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. March 31st 2008, 6:05 pm | |
| I don't really understand it. It's just a bunch of...stones? with your name on it.
You should try something more exciting, IMO.
~Egaro | |
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RR
Pinnacle of Survival
Posts : 8155
Registration date : 2008-01-31
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. March 31st 2008, 9:07 pm | |
| plzz and the avy looks good maybe a bit more color could help | |
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Egaro
Hero of Time
Posts : 13850
Registration date : 2008-01-26
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. March 31st 2008, 9:10 pm | |
| Thanks.
I was trying to, but...
And I'll leave someone else to critique that, I don't have enough experience to.
~Egaro | |
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RR
Pinnacle of Survival
Posts : 8155
Registration date : 2008-01-31
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. March 31st 2008, 10:48 pm | |
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Adsertif.
Hero of Time
Posts : 11290
Registration date : 2008-02-03
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. March 31st 2008, 11:01 pm | |
| It looks alot better I see you blended the bottom, maybe going around while zoomed in with a tiny brush and smudging it will work, or you could just make some "fog" around him (opaque fog so you can seee the BG. But it lloks better just some general blending, 7.8/10. :) | |
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RR
Pinnacle of Survival
Posts : 8155
Registration date : 2008-01-31
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. April 1st 2008, 5:17 pm | |
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Adsertif.
Hero of Time
Posts : 11290
Registration date : 2008-02-03
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. April 2nd 2008, 10:30 pm | |
| Any more artwork, at least rate my sig. :) | |
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Mickey4741
Paragon
Posts : 7260
Registration date : 2008-01-27
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. April 3rd 2008, 4:23 pm | |
| Your sig is 7/10. It looks a bit too blended and sort of like an abstract ATTEMPT. Sorry. And the text doesn't go well with the sig, and it needs a border. Maybe add a glow or stroke to the text, or change the color. And the colors don't go well. It looks like fiery throwup. o_O | |
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Maria
The Chosen One
Posts : 9446
Registration date : 2008-01-30
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RR
Pinnacle of Survival
Posts : 8155
Registration date : 2008-01-31
| | Subject: Re: .:Official Artwork Critique Thread:. April 3rd 2008, 5:34 pm | |
| That looks great i dont like the c4ds on the stock though. | |
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