fireworks by me

Seeker Posts : 137 Registration date : 2010-05-29

fireworks rattle and crackle it then takes a while
to go flashing like mad and then it's just a minute
and it makes you sad it's just so entertaining
that you have to go paying thats the things
that make you fizz up then comes popping
and cracking up.rumbling and roaring it must
be the fireworks snoring when they wake up
they wake to a glam life up and up.

Drifter Posts : 39 Registration date : 2010-06-23

Vanguard Posts : 4736 Registration date : 2009-05-24

No one-word posts, please.

Nice poem, summer.

Drifter Posts : 39 Registration date : 2010-06-23

srry
its a good poem summer, but you might wanna copyright it:D

Vagabond Posts : 93 Registration date : 2010-06-21

Nice poem darling.

The Chosen One Posts : 9446 Registration date : 2008-01-30

Is it just me, or is this poem subliminally sexual?

Hero for Hire Posts : 1355 Registration date : 2010-03-08

Maria wrote:: Is it just me, or is this poem subliminally sexual?

I didn't notice that untill you pointed it out, but yes.

That's really good considering she's 8.

Subject: Re: fireworks by me June 30th 2010, 1:02 am

Not to badd of a poem summmer, good work. And I dont see this in anyway sexual. :p
-Dan