Song Writing Contest - Theme: {segment of a song: Chorus}

Digintary Posts : 2681 Registration date : 2008-01-27

This is a contest just for fun. No Prizes.

4 people will enter the Chorus they've written (no there doesn't have to be the rest of the song).

Than people willl vote on them!

Post here if your interested.

Paragon Posts : 7260 Registration date : 2008-01-27

My entry:
Why does this happen to me
When you walk bye
I don't know why
Why why why
Does this happen? to me?
do you know? (do you know)
why i dont know
---
Um, not my best

**Hero of Time** Posts : 11494 Registration date : 2008-03-08

darn I am not good at this but I will try my best.
This is from one song I wrote a while ago... very stupid chorus but I am not good at writing songs in the first place.

You said you would rather have me
than a thousand of him
but of course
something has to get in the way
something defeats the purpose
of what you say
'Cause the flower petals lying on the ground
Wedding's all set up yet not a sound
and the good old preacher told
me the STONES NOT OLD, the STONES NOT OLD
so don't sacrifice your life next time
cause you're ruinin' mine! (ruinin' mine.... ruinin' mine...)

There is only one working tune for it... so yeah... and you have to hear the whole song to eventually get it. Anyway, it's a bit long.

Paragon Posts : 7260 Registration date : 2008-01-27

When I read that it sounds like it should go to the tune of "Hey there delilah" Remember Nuclear Tears Argie? (Me and argie are good friends)

**Hero of Time** Posts : 11494 Registration date : 2008-03-08

-Argie and I
-It does not go to any tune that is already in a song
-Nuclear Tears is already a new band I am making
Lead singer- Alvin
Electric Guitarist (his guitar can be put quickly on settings to make it a bass temporarily)-
Jackie
drummer- "Blam"
:p So there!!

Super-Human Posts : 3251 Registration date : 2008-02-16

My entry

There's place in the world where everybody rocks
where the people say yay and nobody is gray
somewhere,somewhere I know that place exists and I wont
give up til I find,til I find it cause I will do it someday and I'm
sure of it yay,I wont give up,I wont give up so I better wake up and say to myself
trust in myself,trust in myself

Forum Legend Posts : 6175 Registration date : 2008-02-23

Never mind...

Paragon Posts : 7114 Registration date : 2008-01-27

I wrote this song after my dad died:

The colors of your world were so black and white,
but somehow you managed a rainbow of light.
Your the diamond in the rough
A star in the sky
And everyone around you is wondering why?

And even though your not here, even though your gone,
You will always be near, because your spirit lives on

And its the way that you laughed,
And the way that you smiled.
Even though you were only
Here for a while
You lived every day of your life.
Through the pain and strife.
You opened our eyes so that we would see,
Your everything a HERO oughta be.

Your middle name was courage,
You had no fear
Whenever someone asked you,
You always made it clear
You weren't gonna let this
Get you down
You lived everyday without a frown

And even though your not here, even though your gone,
You will always be near, because your spirit lives on

And its the way that you laughed,
And the way that you smiled.
Even though you were only
Here for a while
You lived every day of your life.
Through the pain and strife.
You opened our eyes so that we would see,
Your everything a hero oughta be.

Theres something about this
That gives us hope
Theres a light in the tunnel
And we all know.
So many people miss you
This isn't goodbye
Someday we'll be with you
We'll meet you in the sky

It took me about a week to get the lyrics, but i just put together a few chords on acoustic and it sounded good.

**Hero of Time** Posts : 13850 Registration date : 2008-01-26

There's not much you can say after you read that...

My sister Boo might be interested; I'll ask her to post one of her songs. ;)
~Egaro

Paragon Posts : 7114 Registration date : 2008-01-27

Thanks Egaro.

Digintary Posts : 2911 Registration date : 2008-04-11

DirkD wrote:: I wrote this song after my dad died:

The colors of your world were so black and white,
but somehow you managed a rainbow of light.
Your the diamond in the rough
A star in the sky
And everyone around you is wondering why?

And even though your not here, even though your gone,
You will always be near, because your spirit lives on

And its the way that you laughed,
And the way that you smiled.
Even though you were only
Here for a while
You lived every day of your life.
Through the pain and strife.
You opened our eyes so that we would see,
Your everything a HERO oughta be.

Your middle name was courage,
You had no fear
Whenever someone asked you,
You always made it clear
You weren't gonna let this
Get you down
You lived everyday without a frown

And even though your not here, even though your gone,
You will always be near, because your spirit lives on

And its the way that you laughed,
And the way that you smiled.
Even though you were only
Here for a while
You lived every day of your life.
Through the pain and strife.
You opened our eyes so that we would see,
Your everything a hero oughta be.

Theres something about this
That gives us hope
Theres a light in the tunnel
And we all know.
So many people miss you
This isn't goodbye
Someday we'll be with you
We'll meet you in the sky

It took me about a week to get the lyrics, but i just put together a few chords on acoustic and it sounded good.

Cool song DirkD! ;)
10/10

**Hero of Time** Posts : 11494 Registration date : 2008-03-08

Wow, DirkD, that song is great! Too bad the chorus is pretty short. And it only comes up twice. :{

Digintary Posts : 2802 Registration date : 2008-04-08

I am part of an all-girls band, and this is the chorus for our most known song (most of the 4th grade know it). Too bad we have no technicians to help us record these songs! Well, anyway, the song is called "Crazy Girl." And don't ask me I'm not the person who wrote this song (the lead singer did, and I only wrote the music notes for the drums, since I play drums)!!!!

I'm a crazy Girl (meanwhile drum notes)

(guitar notes)

I'm a crazy Girl... (drum notes)

(guitar notes)

Then the verses. I forgot the 1st verse (sooooooooo long)
But then,
"Then he said you're..." (part of 1st verse, going into the chorus)

A Crazy Girl... (drums)
(guitar notes)

In a crazy world... (drums)
(guitar notes)

2nd Verse: Then we went out into the yard
To watch the fireworks and get some pie
Then we had to go bye, bye, byyyyyyyyyyyyyye........ (final, i know its a short song but the leader said it was ENOUGH)

giatekla

Adept Posts : 1983 Registration date : 2008-01-26

DirkD wrote:: I wrote this song after my dad died:

The colors of your world were so black and white,
but somehow you managed a rainbow of light.
Your the diamond in the rough
A star in the sky
And everyone around you is wondering why?

And even though your not here, even though your gone,
You will always be near, because your spirit lives on

And its the way that you laughed,
And the way that you smiled.
Even though you were only
Here for a while
You lived every day of your life.
Through the pain and strife.
You opened our eyes so that we would see,
Your everything a HERO oughta be.

Your middle name was courage,
You had no fear
Whenever someone asked you,
You always made it clear
You weren't gonna let this
Get you down
You lived everyday without a frown

And even though your not here, even though your gone,
You will always be near, because your spirit lives on

And its the way that you laughed,
And the way that you smiled.
Even though you were only
Here for a while
You lived every day of your life.
Through the pain and strife.
You opened our eyes so that we would see,
Your everything a hero oughta be.

Theres something about this
That gives us hope
Theres a light in the tunnel
And we all know.
So many people miss you
This isn't goodbye
Someday we'll be with you
We'll meet you in the sky

It took me about a week to get the lyrics, but i just put together a few chords on acoustic and it sounded good.

Darn it... You made me cry. The only time I cry is when I'm SUPER SAD (like an immediate family member died) or somebody just shot me in the nuts with a BB gun (which has happened to me).

Adept Posts : 1844 Registration date : 2008-03-16

Nice song.

**Hero of Time** Posts : 13850 Registration date : 2008-01-26

I think I see a winner. *sniffs*
~Egaro

Paragon Posts : 7114 Registration date : 2008-01-27

Yeah, Karma who wins?

Observer Posts : 309 Registration date : 2008-03-30

Um, am I too late to post the chorus of one of my songs? I'll post it just in case.

It was the sunset sunsation
Colors reached
From shore to shore
It was the sunset sunsation
Beauty, oh galore
Fills the universe

Yeah, I'm the lead singer in a band called the Rock'itz

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