Jack's Big Wreck, Or Not?

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Hey this story is really good...And this is my first story but its fricken awesome...And i really hope you read it...Its made by me in MS-Word toke my 2 days..its 8 3/4 Pages..
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Jack's Big Wreck, Or Not?

Once there was your normal
average 14 Year old kid…And like always the story starts at the beginning…Shall
we?

Chapter One

Jack is walking down the hall
at first period off to English class….While suddenly..

*POFF* Some girl bumps onto
jack Falling down with all her books,Then Jack helps her get her books and says

"Be careful Next
time."

The girl thanks him and Runs
off,Jack continues walking down the hall looking down..while Suddenly Mr.Philip[The
Principal] catchs him late for 1^st Period… Jack explains everything
but Mr.Philip doesn’t understand and …

*Swishhh!*

He go's running of to hide…*He
hide's in the locker*….Confusing Mr.Philip which leads him back in his
office…Then jack runs quickly to English class..While Ms.Jessica shouts

"Jack…why are you
late??,The class has been waiting…"

The mysterious girl shouts out
from her desk: Miss it's all my fault I bumped on to him and made him a little
late….Please don’t punish him..

Jack being very surprised…

Ms.Jessica says "Well… ok
but don’t let me catch you doing that again Sarah!"

Jack goes to his seat feeling a
bit shy….

Ms.Jessica shouts out loud

"Ok, Everyone turn to page
164 in their textbooks and read Silently!"

As you know everyone toke out
their text books and read the lesson..But jack was whispering to the Mysterious
Girl …Sarah.

Jack says "Um..thanks for
the cover..I really owe you.."

"Not at all, Hey do you
want to come over my house today just for study?"

"Ye….

Ms Jessica " JACK!! I Just
saved you from detention!! DON’T MAKE ME ANGRY!!"

Jack responds in a low
voice.." Ye..Yess miss."

Chapter 2

Later, When 1^st
period ends and everyone's out to their lockers Jack quickly searches for
Sarah…While they bump into each other again..

"Hehe.." Sarah
giggles.., "Anyways wanna come to my house today?"

Jack responds:

" Umm hey ….Yes.. I'll
come over your house…Sure why not I guess!"

"Great! Come around 5 o'
clock!"

"Ok, See you there.."

Jack take's his math notebook
for 2^nd period…

Jack and Sarah are in the same
classes…Anyways the math teacher is Ms. Laurence.. she is very kind to the
class.. She one time gave an entire bottle of Coke to every student in the
class!

Ms. Laurence " Ok my
darlings, Please take out your notebook were going to be having a test today
"

"Oh shi*" Jack says
in a loud voice almost Ms. Laurence hearing…

"What's wrong …Umm oh how
embarrassing I never got to know your name,..

Jack responds " It's
Jack…Jack Ronald.."

Ms. Laurence "Oh what do
we have here…Two love birds whispering at math class?"

(As you didn’t know Ms.
Laurence is even more embarrassing than kind)

Jack says: "Ur.. I was just asking her for a pencil…"

Ms. Laurence :"Hehe ..sure
you were…" (Winking at Jack)

The entire class laughed and
jack knew he was blushing….

Jack became very frustarated ,As he had a clean
Rep…well..Until now..

"Ya!!! What the hell is
wrong with you Laurence!! That was so mother ****ing Embarassing!!!!! "

*Ms. Laurence just fainted* as
Jack was the top student..

Sarah whispered to herself ..
" Holy Crap!"

Jack didn't know what to do now
so he just ran to the Boy's room as Ms. Laurence Couldn't get in there…

Jack said in his mind " Oh
my god..I Just made a teacher faint this is
the most suckish Day ever!!"

Sarah jumped in the boys room and
locked the door Whispering..

"Jack you've got to think
of a plan to not get Ms. Laurence tell Mr.Philip!"

"I Know..But what can I
do?"

Sarah Responds " Here is
my plan…Get into the Cafeteria And get a knife to kill Laurence.. we can dump
here body somewhere …While everyone's out for 3^rd period..I can't
help you but you’ve got all my luck….You have 5 minutes till 3^rd
period hurry and get the knife!"

Without Responding jack take's
a deep breath and Runs to the cafeteria….

Chapter 3

"Oh REPORT ME I SWORE - REPORT ME I SWORE - REPORT ME I SWORE!!"

Totototootoo! , Mr Philip
Singing a song as he goes through the hall way…

Jack quickly see's the girls
toilet..And barge's right in!.

Luckily There was nowhone there
except Sarah peeing on the wall toilets..

And she gasped in horror and
grief..

"Jack what the hell are
you doing here!" *Zipping her pants*

"Sorry to disturb you
,Please slap me ,I was only trying to dodge Philip.."

Sarah shouts "Well don’t
do it again!!", Now her voice turns low "Get to the cafeteria you're
running out of time …"

Jack says : Ok..

He runs out not seeing Mr.
Philip and luckily gets into the cafeteria stealing the knife like he doesn’t
see the lunchlady…He quickly runs back to his class..

Luckily the bell rang and
everyone was out and then luckily Jack remember" oh f(censored) I forgot
about the class!"

Jack just ran to Laurence.. and
cryingly..He stabbed her leaving her dead…

Sarah came to jack holding his
hands…

Chapter 4

Sarah "Jack take this
spray it's Memory Forget Spray just go!! Ill
take care of Laurence.."

Jack then running in the hall
spraying everyone in the entire class..Then unluckily Mr. Philip grabs him by
his shirt Screaming

"RONALD!!,What are you
doing!!!!"

Jack said…."Uhh"

And he remembered he had memory
spray so he quickly kicked Philip on his lower stomach..

"RONALD!!!!! YOURE
EXPELLED!!"

Then jack sprayed him ,He was
scared so much he finished the entire can…Then he ran taking all his books in a
bag running to his Class…

"Sarah!"

Sarah responded .." And
done!!...Dont worry she's in the school underground nobody can get her
now!"

Jack said " But how did …

Sarah replied "Ah ah ah!
*Touching his lips with her finger* , Less talkey more running!!"

Jack said "were in our
class…"

"Oh silly me! , My books
are always in my desk so no worries,Hey why have you got your bag?"

"…This? Oh, I was just
going to put it in the …

Sarah Screamed! "No you
weren’t!" *In a giggly voice...*

"You were trying to run
home eh?"

Jack said back embarrassingly
" Umm yes…Sorry.."

"No way! Why do you think
I got my books in the desk!!!"

"Lets get outta
here!"

Chapter 5

Jack said " Ok out the
window!"

They both escaped and grabbed
the 10'clock bus…And before they were getting in the Bus..

Sarah said: "Hey wait!, We
can't go home..What will our parent's ask us!!?"

"Oh you're right..But what
do we do for 5 hours? Lay in the streets?"

Sarah said scarely" I
don't know? What do you think?"

Jack thinking of many
thoughts….He decided on one he Liked the most and thought was the safest…

Jack said"Were's your
house?"

"At Liverpool
House 224 , Why?"

Jack said happily" Im 227!
How lucky!"

Sarah said in a gasp "
What are you thinking of!?"

"I Have an idea, We are
both hungry right? Lets go to some restaurant I got my allowance today…50 Big
bucks!"

Sarah said " I Got 45..Oh
come on what the heck.."

"Great Umm the closest
restaurant is ..Le Pierre?"

Sarah said:"No way im
going to Burger King"

Jack said in astonishment
" Oh yeah ,We don’t wanna waste our money on some restaurant for food like
20 dollars!"

Jack following Sarah to burger
kings…

"Oh my god!" Pulling
back Sarah out of the door into the alley…"Those are my parents!!"

Sarah said: " Well…They
aren’t mine so…"

Sarah walks into burger king
ordering a Whopper Meal…

(Poor jack all Alone…)

Chapter 6

"Oh no…they're coming
out!!"

Jack quickly takes a newspaper
and hide's himself….

Poor guy so scared he hid their
for an hour..Burger Kings was busy ……..

Sarah came out with her long
blond her free swishing…

"Ah! That was
delicious...!"

Jack replied" Yeah for
you.."

Sarah said " Oh, Sorry but
I was hungry ..Here I brought you an apple pie…

Jack said …" Thanks….i
guess.."

Sarah said : we still have 4 hours……..

"D'oh I know….I was thinking of renting an aparment
for 2 hours.. "

Sarah said " Fine by me!, Only
if we have separate beds.."

Jack told sarah to follow her
and they walked into the cheapest hotel called *LandMark*

"I need to go to the
bathroom I'll be right back.."

"Ok.."

Jack was having an idea…

"My good man! , I'd like
to rent a room with 1 master bed….for 2 hours only with an Alarm clock thank
you!"

The Counter said
"Absoulotely , Here are your keys…

Sarah came back happily "
Hey did you get our rooms? "

Chapter 7

Jack said" Yes..But they
have no rooms With separate beds …Sorry… I'll guess we will have to
share.."

Sarah said" Oh Well,
Better than nothing…"

Jack knew she was angry…Sarah
was getting pale…

Jack and sarah both barge into
the room and lock the room…

Jack says " Ahh..Im going
straight to bed.."

Jumping onto the bouncy bed…

Sarah said " Ok..Im going
to be watching T.V. till I feel sleepy…"

Jack went and set the alarm
clock to 2 ' o clock.. since they needed the 1 hour for the bus trip to their
Homes..

Jack just fell to sleep he was
way too Tired….

As you know Sarah was way too
bored for .T.V. So she just fell asleep…

Later on…Jack had a big
dream a big dream….maybe good maybe
bad..Lets find out

Jack was first running some
grassland..the Grass was so tall it almost poked into his nose…He was running
searching..But for what?

He didn't even know what he was
doing…He was screaming..

"Mom!!!, Mom!! ,Dad!!,
Ms.Jessica… Please please, This is a dream.. Stop.."

All big bad thoughts came in
his mind..

And in the dream *POOF* Sarah
Come's out of nowhere having 2 horns on top and a long red tail.. She had a big
spear …

And then jack's mom and dad
were coming to hug him .. Suddenly…

Sarah stabbed him and blood was
coming out of his entire stomach..

Then Mr.Philip came from the
sky and threw bolts of lighting on to Jack…

Jack was so afraid…He was
shouting in his mind… And then sarah disappeared .. Then everything turned
black..

Then all flames of fire are
scorching everywhere….

Then some lady with wings
screamed out..

"YOU KILLED A PERSON, YOU
HAVE DONE SOMETHING TO HARM ONE OF YOUR OWN SPECIES…YOUR GOING TO
HELL!!!!"

Then Jack woke up screaming out
so loud the other rooms could hear it…

Sarah was still deep in
sleep….Jack looked at the time and Ding Dang the bell rang waking up Sarah…

Chapter 8

"Yawn…Jack what are you
doing awake…?"

"Uhh I had a bad
dream.."

"Well ok…We have 30
minutes left till we're back in home.."

"Ok.."

Then in the last 30 minute's
they couldn’t go to sleep, Turns out they kept on talking all the time and were
late 10 minutes…

Jack and Sarah went out of the
hotel and going and waiting on the Bus stop..

Sarah asked Jack "
Jack…why are we going back to our homes?"

Jack " We have to, Our
parents take care of us…."

Sarah"Ok..Sorry.."

They went into the bus going
for an hour along the road so Bored…jack was actually drooling of boredom..

Finally the bus stopped and
they both got out,

Jack "Well see you Sarah..Ill see you at
school…"

Sarah "Oh my god, What
will the staff ask us about our escape??"

Jack" They don’t know I
used the spray on everyone remember?"

Sarah" Oh yeah…it was that
bad dream made me a bit confused.."

"Wait! What dream?"

Sarah " Some dream were
you were like a devil and killing me,There were all these flames.. It was so
scary.. I just wanna go back homr..

Jack "Wow, Well see you…

Jack and Sarah both came back
to their home's… There parents never knew their incident ….

The next Day at school, Nobody
noticed a thing all were back to normal and each time Sarah & Jack saw each
other they remembered there weirdest adventure…

The End

Written By :

Nooh A.Nabi
Mukhtar

Hero for Hire Posts : 1341 Registration date : 2008-01-26

Erm..wow.

7/10 Shouldn't be spaced like that.

Hero for Hire Posts : 1344 Registration date : 2008-05-02

I Know,Spaced it way too much!

Super-Human Posts : 3072 Registration date : 2008-01-26

wow dude that was kind of....... nevermind

good story though

Paragon Posts : 7260 Registration date : 2008-01-27

Good story 8/10. The sharing the bed part was weird... I thought they were going to do something. O_o

Forum Legend Posts : 6175 Registration date : 2008-02-23

9/10
nice dream bit. Fweaky!