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Mike Hawke
Drifter
Posts : 35
Registration date : 2010-08-28
| Subject: It's all ah mess  August 31st 2010, 8:52 am | |
|  Got any tips? Suggestions? Critique? Dead threats? Go ahead. | |
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Rifleman-Dlb
Vanguard
Posts : 4869
Registration date : 2008-10-23
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess August 31st 2010, 9:09 am | |
| Make the fire that green stuff and put the text on the other side of her and make it all black.
Other then that, pretty good. 8/10. | |
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Mike Hawke
Drifter
Posts : 35
Registration date : 2010-08-28
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess August 31st 2010, 9:16 am | |
| - TweezyMan wrote:
- Other then that, pretty good. 8/10.
Thanks. You're Dlb, right? If so, then... - Big Dlb wrote:
- Make the fire that green stuff and put the text on the other side of her and make it all black.
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snowmanx
Super-Human
Posts : 3143
Registration date : 2008-06-03
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess August 31st 2010, 10:07 am | |
| It's pretty decent. Looks too cramped up to me though. 9/10. :) | |
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Emess
Adept
Posts : 1559
Registration date : 2009-03-02
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess August 31st 2010, 1:06 pm | |
| Put the fire at the other side. Doing so will add flow. The text looks nice. I like the green effect as well. Depth is okay. | |
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HavoKitten
Hero for Hire
Posts : 1355
Registration date : 2010-03-08
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess August 31st 2010, 1:07 pm | |
| It's too small I can't read anything. | |
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ll-ll-ll-ASTRO-ll-ll-ll
Vagabond
Posts : 72
Registration date : 2010-08-17
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess August 31st 2010, 5:18 pm | |
| OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!
PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is the exact style that i love!!!!
10/10 no joke! | |
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ParkourSAM
Digintary
Posts : 2679
Registration date : 2008-06-16
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess August 31st 2010, 7:44 pm | |
| Astro, I don't understand your ratings that you type. At. All.
By the way, I know who you are. I saw your Photobucket Gallery.
Anyway, it's not your best that you've done. May I suggest adding some more gradient maps and placing the text somewhere more... readable? It could be great if the signature was bigger, and if that weird line at the very left coming out of the "fire" was change to something else. | |
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Mike Hawke
Drifter
Posts : 35
Registration date : 2010-08-28
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess August 31st 2010, 9:12 pm | |
| - MrMess wrote:
- Put the fire at the other side. Doing so will add flow. The text looks nice. I like the green effect as well. Depth is okay.
It made it look too symmetrical. But thanks for the suggestion nonetheless. - BiteTheDust wrote:
- Anyway,
it's not your best that you've done. May I suggest adding some more
gradient maps and placing the text somewhere more... readable? It could
be great if the signature was bigger, and if that weird line at the very
left coming out of the "fire" was change to something else. The text isn't supposed to be all that readable. I just put it there to hide something. I'll experiment with some gradient maps, though. | |
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Digit
Posts : 2262
Registration date : 2009-02-12
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess August 31st 2010, 11:30 pm | |
| Looks neat and I know you are trying to hide something with the text but the text looks sloppy and unreadable. | |
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Sjb
Retired Staff
Posts : 6980
Registration date : 2008-10-09
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess September 1st 2010, 3:58 pm | |
| Put the text on the other side, other than that it looks pretty good. (:
9/10 | |
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ll-ll-ll-ASTRO-ll-ll-ll
Vagabond
Posts : 72
Registration date : 2010-08-17
| | Subject: Re: It's all ah mess September 1st 2010, 7:59 pm | |
| - BiteTheDust wrote:
By the way, I know who you are.
Good. :) | |
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